Nothing good is ever written - it is rewritten. Such obvious truth you might've heard or read a couple of times while searching for some useful writing advices. It's true. While it's a bit bland - after a couple of years of constant practice - you understand that it is very true.
Writing something really good right in the first bout is a miracle of sorts - it happens, but not too often. Almost never. Just never in my case. Usually you write the thing down, then read it, look what works and what not and start to revise certain parts or even the whole text in order to make it click. That's how the thing works.
Revision is inevitable in the writer's work. If you ignore it - you will get just another half-baked something-something. You'll get just another possibly OK-passable text that no one will care about. When you are writing the text - you want to express your best thoughts, feelings, you want to show your skills - but you can't do it on the fly. It takes time and effort - not only gust of inspiration.
Great Jeffery Allen once said that "art might be the only thing in life that men have full control over" - you need to use to your benefit. And here's another thing. Doing "what is best for the text" before the text is written is delusional. You don't know what is best for the text up until you have it some sort of finished form. "Feels right" or "feels wrong" is not an argument. Good intentions are rather bad thing in case of writing. That why you need to write the draft first. When you have the draft - you have the foundation for the things to evolve.
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In my own practice I apply Blessed Three Drafts way. That's my own theory. I've made it up for this text.
There are three stages of writing and revising the text. Holy First Draft is the place where you let everything to spill out. In a raw form. It may also stink a bit, it happens sometimes. Here's one very important thing to remember. For text to be really good - you need to let the first draft to be a mess. Trust yourself - you need to let it flow hard, to flush it over, to flood everything - up to the point you will feel that's you've reached the line. Let your head burst with variations, let yourself include every little detail even if it makes no sense. Without that you will be unable to proceed in a reasonable way.
After you've finished Draft 1 - you can start Sacred Second Draft where you can reconsider some stylistic choices, add something you forgot, fix grammar and spelling mistakes and many other gorgeous issues that may come up with the text. You scale it back to a reasonable form. You make it coherent. Leaner and simpler. You cut the fat. You bring justice to the text and leave only those parts that can justify its being on the page. Consider that every paragraph must move the thing forward and contain at least one unique idea that resonates with the others. After that you can go to the main event - #3.
Divine Third Draft is the point when you can play big. Imagine yourself a general planning a battle - you know state of things; you know what you need; you know what you have. You need to make those two meet on your terms. And you're doing it step by step. First by mending the structure, making dense, getting the pacing right, putting fancy chiaroscuro on the reasoning, changing the shape of the sentences that contain your ideas, adding some color with some ties and knots here and there that summarize the thing and grab the reader's attention. You polish the sentences - make them ring and shine.
After that - the only changes you can make are cosmetic. In fact - after that you just deliver the text.
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While revising the text on any stage you have to be aware about several undercurrents that may prevent you from performing a legitimate revision and will stealthy force you to perform a cowardly read-through instead.
Usually it happens because you get used to the text after spending some time doing the research, shaping its structure and writing it. It's ok - to get away from that you just need to take some time off the text. After some time - you will see it differently - flaws will jump in your face and you will eliminate them with no mercy, sentiment or, sometimes, reason. Unreasonable cuts may also happen sometimes. Because "less is more" and stuff. But simple keeping in mind "what adds to the big picture and dangling" will make it easier to follow what must and must not be in the text.
Remember that there's a line between making the text better by eliminating the flaws and making the text blander by eliminating any trace of its personality. There's no point in a simple recounting of the facts without any personal perspective or colorful word use. It makes the reading of the text pointless to the potential reader.
Sometimes clumsy sentence structures can tell more about the subject than the words inside them. Sometimes off-kilter use of obscure words can evoke very different perception of otherwise mundane subject. You need to keep that in mind. Commonly such things are considered as flaws but hey - rules forbid many things that make the text interesting. But they make sense - since without them everything will be an incomprehensible mess. Little bending of the rules is what makes the text interesting.
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Revision is the chance for the text to achieve perfection. There's no point in neglecting it.
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